Greatfire.org, group of activists, which is monitoring Internet censorship in China reported the attack on 20 October 2014. One day later, hack has been confirmed by Apple (Timberg, 2014). Method used to hack was "man-in-the-middle" (Linshi, 2014). This method can work, when connection between user and service is not encrypted, which is common in China. Hacker can track data packages sent by user, which allows them to grab some information such as password and username (Nohe, 2018). "Man-in-the-middle" scheme (thesslstore.com, 2018) This hack starts a discussion about lacks in cybersecurity in China. GreatFire.org states that it was not their fault. Owner of the iCloud blamed Chinese government (Timberg, 2014). Moreover, the organisation mentioned, this attack can be organised by some Chinese authorities, regarding images and videos from Hong Kong protests (Augenbraun, 2014). However, the Chinese government denies responsibility for this hack (Timberg, 2014). Refere...
Your introduction is interesting and has its advantages, however it would be good to expand it a bit more.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your feedback Emil. I wanted to expand my essay not only in introduction, but the limit is 550 words unfortunately. Now I have 545 or something around it, so it's impossible. But thanks, it will help me with next essays.
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